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Jingo: "there tell me you did NOT see that near the second limb of the third tree near the knothole"

Limpur: "eye will make HAIKU to remember this position and the favor granted"

Jingo: "the thing is small look closer SQUINT can you NOT squint eye like CHARLAX taught you?"

Jingo: "Haiku will not make this image reappear the timing went off the thrill of discover is no longer new"

Limpur: Here is my Haiku:

Head of mouse on branch of tree
During discourse leaf
Unseen turn to see the mouse
Limpur: "eye seem to have made up a fragment?"

Limpur: "Haiku is unfinished my thoughts is interrupted JINGO please make some more TEA?"

Jingo: "You have missed the idea eye meant to convey not the MOUSE "eye missed it" but the linen fragment so carefully twined about the limb surely even YOU can see that as if it was twisted by a human hand?"

Limpur: NOT even the great POET CHARLAX could see that from this great of distance you must be SUPERMAN this JINGO is CLARK KENT!"

Jingo:  Linen cloth is shard on limb
            Poet is the best
            Learning of the way

Jingo: "This My HAIKU is PRAISE."
Jingo: "My HAIKU is a phrase."



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